Score: 4

"needs work...."

submission: Mario & Luigi Superstar

date: October 17, 2006

no offense but maybe you should just practice for a while.
ANIMATION=ok sprite work, but about every 2 or 3 frames the sprites go fuzzy, also a background may be nice.2/5
SOUND=music was good, but some SFX would make it better! so im goin to give sound a 3/5
CHARACTERS=mario and luigi, but the last time i checked, luigi had green fire and not thunder, im not saying thunder is bad, but maybe just green fire would do. 4/5
PLOT=i couldnt understand much about it, just mario becoming the superstar then luigi attacked him. 2/5
PERSONAL RATING=needs work, srry,
OvErAlL=practice abit with sprites then try again ok?

Score: 7

"laugh out loud funny"

submission: Jack-o-Lantern Hatred

date: October 16, 2006

Its the perfect family movie, without the family!
ANIMATION=looks liek its frame-by-frame, im not a big fan of F.B.F. but this is an exception! 4/5
PLOT=i would explain what i thought of it, but it would spoil it for some viewers! 3/5
CHARACTERS=not much about characters here, so it will be a 3/5
SOUND=graphic...made everyone in earshot of the computer giggle!5/5!
PPERSONAL REVIEW=funny overall, animation can use a little(very little) fixing, but other than that good! i voted 5!
OvErAlL=portal worthy! 16/20

Score: 8

"awsome!"

submission: Zelda: Sneaking In

date: October 11, 2006

well, this is pretty good, so i protected it!
ANIMATION=i honestly couldnt explain how i much i liked it..4/5!
PLOT=wicked, link and a pervy kokiri sneaking into the change room. 4/5
SOUND=voices were quiet, if it werent for the subtitles i couldnt understand squat. also the lack of music kinda lost a point. 3/5!
CHARACTERS=like i said, link and a pervy kokiri, a funny pair. 4/5!
PERSONAL RATING=portal worthy, i voted 4.
OvErAlL=original! when it passes judgement i will definalty submit it to the zelda collection! total:14/20
i enjoyed it!

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